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The Puzzling Simpliclity

Love is like a circle
It never ends, it never stops
Keeps going round
Till the penny drops

We realize the cycle
Embrace that that there is no change
Its puzzling and yet so simple
Like a circle going round again

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  • CelticQueen
    September 9, 2008

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    I like how your poem circled back on itself, beginning and ending with 'like a circle.'


    Thanks for entering. cq


  • stella rose
    September 6, 2008
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    That's both beautiful and very true. Love endures forever.


  • charmander13
    September 6, 2008

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    Love it!! This is short and sweet and superb. I kinda think that everything in life is a cycle..and probably the same goes for love eh?
    Great poem yeah


  • Raven Tears gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    It's a funny emotion love, it's a wonderful thing yet it can be so hurtful at the same time.
    But when it's real and you heart tells you so then it's meant to be.
    This write was well written, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
    Love and light.