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Rise

My time has come,
Destiny awaits,
embark the steps,
reveal my fate.

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Contest: have to use only 13 words! =O

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 10, 2008

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    I love your title for this, I didn't read it til after I read the poem so after I had seen the imagery of light shining upon a face welcoming the revaluation of fate I peeked at the title and I am very impressed by it.
    I think it brings more to the poem


    Thank You & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda