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Gotta be somebody's blues

The pawns on the table, my hearts in the back

you put up a good fight but you didn't give much slack

avoiding the summer but not the heat

it's my heart not my body that you like to mistreat

it stings to hear you say that you give up today

when tomorrow could be the best you'v ever seen

you'll always be mine, but you'll always be mean.

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How does this poem make you feel? can you relate to it in some way?

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  • August Starlight silver member
    January 25

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    This poem is a little bit confusing, but since you've put it in this particular contest I think I might get it. Thanks for entering.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie