nostalgic, soft
words touch
light
the mind
where heart uplifts
its soar, deepens
into flight
of time
meeting
within silent yield,
reaped years
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Prompted by myrataal's: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4574375
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soft touch
mind uplifts
deepened flight
meet yeild years
nostalgic the light
where its soar
into time
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parenchma,
I think we should start something like this to experience through others what they experience in others - thanks for reading my poem, and by no doubt you would have read myrataal's also. I enjoyed your 'poem' expression - it added value. Be blessed. Frans
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I loved how words like ...
uplifts and soar and flight, linked to my warbled whispers ... When part becomes art, the heart finds its soulfilled niche in the soft, fluted song of Love.
We are truly endopathically linked. Thank you Frans, you honor our memories of the Divine.
Love
Myra
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WOW!
I checked out link to myrataal's poetic work that inspired yours here. I can SO see how your inspiration took flight after reading myrataal's beautiful piece.
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Thank you so much for reading my poem too ..
it has given me a warm feeling of interactive connectivity, if I may use that somewhat tautologic phrase.
I shall return the favor, SEA angel. Love, Myra
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SEA angel
what a lovely AP name. Will be over soon to read some of your poetry. Thanks for your comment, and more so, that you took the time to read some of myrataal's poetry. Be blessed. Frans
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Intelligent
Abstract and yet I fell connected to its simplicity. This is a deep and very softly written poem. It seems almost elegant. Great Write Frans!
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Thank you Beyond Zion
I appreciate that stopped by to read my poem. I have already peeped at your page, and will be over soon to read some of your work. Frans
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i dont get it either i cant conect with this at all
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That's fine with me.
Have you read the poem in my author's notes? My poem is based on this. Let me know if it still does not make sense. Frans
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No, sorry, but I just did not connect with this poem despite re-reading it a number of times and then reading the praise by other writers. I am giving you a couple of claps on the grounds that you probably deserve them, I mean, what would I know about poetry? LOL
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I so appreciate
your honesty - not much of that around when someone experiences what you did. I know some would not be able to appreciate such comments, but I do, and more so, because I have come to enjoy your sincerity. I'm running for a meeting now, and hope that I'll have time to explain my thoughts to you - that is if you care to receive them. Have a great day. Frans
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Wonderful Poem!!!!!!!!!
Hello Frans, You imagery is lovely, rather soothing. It is nice to sit back and smile upon the pleasant things in years past. So much nicer then dwelling on the not so pleasant. This was a delight to read my friend. Take care and have a nice a wonderful weekend. Take care.
Bless You and Yours,
Sandy 
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Dear Sandy
I'm glad you saw the positive, as so often some just 'think' of the past as a negative experience. Have blessed day. Frans
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Lovely sentiment, I like the imagery you have penned with this one, gives a real sense of time. Wonderful write!
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Thanks Tirrell
your comments are appreciated. Frans
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Your poem reached my soul
as always
Excellent choice of words, especially the title!
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Thank you -
nice of you to stop by. Frans
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Nice use of meatphors. detailed imagry. I felt a yearning throughout the poem. It also had a nice flow."Reaped years" was catchy and clever. return the favor?
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lisapoet,
you have summarised what I tried to convey in this poem. I will be stopping by soon. Frans
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Memories remembered can give the heart such a soft glow and in most cases we can sit back and smile saying they were good years.
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Yikes,
that was a quick response. Thanks for reading it, I always appreciate when you stop by. Frans
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