You stood me up
This has happened before
Take a rain check?
Don’t we always
Bringing your friends
Spoil the evening
I know this feeling
This has happened before
Déjà vu
Same old story
Déjà vu
Different days
These useless words
“I love you…
… forever and always”
They’re over used
It’s the same old story
There’s still no change
I know the ending
Why let it in
Day after day
I’m not healing
Only breaking
Time for change
Just getting ready
For the next time
That I’ll fall
Déjà vu
Same old story
Déjà vu
Different day
Why bare the pain
Time after time
See this story
My story
There is a change
This time is different
I don’t know the ending
Not this time
Déjà vu
Same old story
Déjà vu
Different day
There’s something different
I don’t know the ending
Déjà vu
Not this time
It’s a different day
With a different story
I don’t know the ending
To my story…
Author notes
....another attempt at writing something...
thoughts...
Comments
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WoW this was fantastic
Why let it in
Day after day
I’m not healing
Only breaking
Time for change
Just getting ready
For the next time
That I’ll fall
I feel like that everyday ahaGreat WriteThanks for Sharing
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Good
And might I say a very good attempt. I know the emotion of the first 3/4 of your poem. Very good way to display it.
The one thing I thought though, the first stanza. "Bringing your friends, spoil the evening" I don't really see the point of that line in this context. -
A poem with the real picture of the love of these days. Superficial and selfish.
Very well written
Love
Bin
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Love it, love it, love it
Deja vu is just the strangest sensation in the world huh? But it's a bloody brilliant thing to write about! great poem again 
Keep it up!
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