Me please
fore what I am about to do
will hurt
an nnocent
I am sorry.
My chest feels tight
and my stomach feels jumpy
meaning I'm really going to go through with
this;
this
time.
Exhale
Inhale
shake
A contest entry
- Best Prewrites From September 2008 by amaranthine lover.
2100 points, ended February 6, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thanks for the entry
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Okay, this was creepy. Sort of. Not sure what the intention, but I felt a little scared, not sure if I should duck, or what.
Still, I liked it, it spoke volumes.
Peace,
jin
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