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Another Night Without You

 

 

            Whenever you leave for your weekly trips,

            and travel all over the world without me.

            It breaks my heart knowing that deep inside,

            tonight will be another not spent at your side.

 

            I know that it's always so easy for you,

            to just pack your clothes up and leave.

            But every time you walk out that door,

            I just can't help but fall apart.

 

            I know that you are honest and trustworthy.

            I believe in you and all that you tell me everyday.

            Life is just not the same without you,

            and I want you to know how much I miss you.

 

            When you come home and make love to me,

            you're always so incredible and romantic.

            You whisper words of love into my ears,

            and make me fall in love with you all over again.

 

            It's these moments that mean so much to me. 

            They are the ones that I hold onto whenever you're away. 

            I've built my world around you and would sacrifice,

            all that I am and everything that I own for you.

 

            The love that I have within me right now,

            is so much more than you could ever imagine.

            This temporary long distance relationship,

            drives me almost to the point of insanity.

 

            As I search to find ways to keep you here.

            I know that you have to work everyday,

            and that your heart has always been true.

            I just want you to understand that it hurts me.

 

           To know that you are so far away,

           and that it will be days before we are reunited.

           My darling please know that everything I do,

           is done out of love and respect for you.

 

           I would never cheat or break your heart,

           and I know that you would never let me down either.

           Please be careful wherever you are and whatever you do.

           Don't forget that I will always be right here waiting for you.

 

           Believe me when I tell you that I have been faithful,

           and that only you live in my heart each day.

           Know that when you come home I'll be here,

           with arms wide open and ready to give you my all.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Symphony
    October 9, 2008

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    Oh Jeremy, this was beautiful; sounded like such a struggle, letting the other half go to follow their dreams / jobs / whatnot for even if they return the time spent apart is a toll on the haert ... you wrote this so well

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautiful entry,I know how you feel from past experience, good luck in my contest, Josie


    • Jeremy0826 silver member
      September 26, 2008
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      Hey there my friend!
      Thank you very much for the Gold in your contest.
      I appreciate it and am glad that you enjoyed it!



      Jeremy0826


  • Asylaarix
    September 13, 2008

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    Awww darling
    This was so precious
    So loving
    So emotional
    I loved this
    It broke my heart
    But you have such a way with words
    I love you sweetie
    Big hugz

    TT


  • blondone
    September 13, 2008

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    Heartbreaking and filled with true love emotions this has been written from the heart truly lovely thank you for entering


  • JinSays gold member
    September 7, 2008

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    This is positively sad. I cannot comment on sad right now, because it's too close to home, however, I will say you have me crying like a baby. This is so very real, it just lumps up in my chest, and I can only hope things work out between the two lovers.
    Blessings always, and happy Sunday


  • trekkergirl
    September 6, 2008

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    This is wonderful. I agree with you that long distance loves are always very hard on a couple. Good job

  • Ace - LightWithinMe
    September 6, 2008

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    Hello Jeremy0826. A heartfelt piece for your partner, written well, with some sentiments that I can understand, but not all. But then this wasn't written for me, or by me, not that I would write one for myself anyway, ahhahaa. I hope that it touched your partner in the manner you had hoped it would. My regards.


  • Crazy Coconut
    September 6, 2008

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    Well first off you shouldn't fall in love with a world traveler! lol j/k beautiful heartfelt and sincere. It is hard when you can't be with the one you love. CC


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    I can so relate to this piece.
    I know how sad it can be when your love has to go away.
    It seems like the day just drag by without them. How you just can't wait for them to return home.
    When they come home and you hold them tight not wanting to let them go, all because you missed them so much.
    This was a very good piece and the feelings show through in every word. Excellent job, once again my dear friend.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

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