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notta kitten

you see stripes of fire,

you know I'm a tiger.

My charming beauty's

got you actin goofy....


Your loves manifest,

wishing I'd play with no protest.

But I'm hungry for some' delicious,

so with you I shall be vicious.


Sorry to have made you love me,

My intension's were sorely mistaken.

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  • penman gold member
    September 10, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very interesting and well expressed. Poem. Thank you for sharing.


  • carl dunford
    September 10, 2008

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    "But I'm hungry for some' delicious,
    so with you I shall be vicious" They are great lines,an enjoyable read. Carl.


  • Swan song gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    I agree here Some good lines here and i love the background to