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a dark wall surrounds the small crowd.

andrew eisenschenk


what i have always lacked
in my inane search for something
is the forthright ability
given, as communication.

that being said,
it may be time we start
communicating.

before rubber bullets
and mace,
tear gas and fury

aren't the worst
they're allowed
for 'crowd control'.

freedom.
learn it.

it's
an American cornerstone.





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contradiction.

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  • Walk-Free
    September 7, 2008

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    liked how the short stanzas were full of meaning.

    "freedom.
    learn it.

    it's
    an American cornerstone."

    nice ending; it summed up the whole feel of the poem (: