andrew eisenschenk
what i have always lacked
in my inane search for something
is the forthright ability
given, as communication.
that being said,
it may be time we start
communicating.
before rubber bullets
and mace,
tear gas and fury
aren't the worst
they're allowed
for 'crowd control'.
freedom.
learn it.
it's
an American cornerstone.
Author notes
contradiction.
supermansdead
A contest entry
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1500 points, ended October 7, 2008, 16 entries
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liked how the short stanzas were full of meaning.
"freedom.
learn it.
it's
an American cornerstone."
nice ending; it summed up the whole feel of the poem (:

