Falling in love with you.
You could fall in love with me too.
I think about you day and night,
wishing you were by my side.
No one knows it, not even you...
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Haven't actually written anything i like lately..we'll see how this goes...
-_- soo not my best.
but oh well. i tried.
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i love this
the last line is kinda if-y but everything else is amazing
great job
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thank you.
i don't rly love the last line either.
but it's rather late and it sorta kinda maybe rhymed just a little. -
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