Calico Kitty in Duke City

A calico kitty sits pretty
on a twilight city sidewalk
raptly ready to silently strike
oblivious to the human condition.

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One Moment In Time by Jersene. 2250 points, ended September 23, 2008, 10 entries
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PerfectImperfection
October 14, 2008

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Excellent alliteration here. A wonderful piece penned in so few words, you do quite well with these in my opinion! Well penned!

Jersene
September 23, 2008

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I picture the cat ready to pounce. Enjoyed. Thanks for your entry

natchstucco
September 6, 2008
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cats will do that you know, it's all about them.

lisapoet
September 5, 2008

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So well done. You made the cat more interesting than the reader. The reader responded to the indifference in the cat's "personality". Thank you

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