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Where Has The Love Gone?

Missing image

Just how much more can I give?

I've sacrafised so much

Put dreams on hold

Filled your desires

 

Much time has passed by

Where is the given retured favor

The give moments where you take part?

A relationship can be much like art

Chaotic and beautiful wraped up into one

 

Yearning to share my little secrets

Quarks

Hopes

Dreams

Desires and so much more of me

But it is as if it all fall apon deaf ears

 

I've worked so hard at everything

The relationship

Lifes challenges

Raising a child

All that I do and still

Nothing much from you

 

What happend to the days of love

Adventure and romance

Don't say it still can't be done

Late night talks along with stary filled walks?

Doing absolutly nothing but together enjoying the silence

 

Don't tell me

Or give those excuses

That it's all because of lifes hardships or

Raising a child

Going to work

Dealing with stress

No excuse should be given for a relationship

To not get the love care it deserves

Life throws more then most of us are ready for

So just deal with it

Damn it i'm tired of all this shit!

Where has the love gone?

 

Author notes

This would be the first time of includig any bad language in my poems. It's not normally not my thing, but I'm just in one of those places...

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  • FaerieNWonderland
    November 13, 2008
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    very deep and meaningful i love it


  • Sunshine Always
    October 10, 2008

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    Sometimes release comes from putting things down on paper(or puter) A strong and meaningful piece...mal


  • Til the Day I Die
    September 8, 2008

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    wow

    omg i love this!!! your poem is amazing and i love the inuyasha and kagome pic =) they are beast...well good job and i can't wait to read more