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Mercurious

A bittersweet design
Kindling chromatic lust
Heavy heart in retrospect
A warped view of space-time
Immortal ballet of photons
Her subjects waltz in emotion
Her hand to draw them near
Temptress of the wanderers
Sister of the electric, queen of the cosmic
Mercurious,
Magnetic

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rizzie

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  • carole21
    September 24, 2008

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    nicely done . . liked "A warped view of space-time" and "Sisters of the electric" . . congrats on the HM


  • spiritualangel
    September 24, 2008
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    Beautiful. Best of Luck.


  • written-in-ink
    September 9, 2008
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    i really like this
    it flowed so well
    i could hear every words just bounce along

    very nice job1


  • maralisa silver member
    September 6, 2008
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    a brilliant take on the promt with some wonderful imagery good luck in the contest