broken pieces
shattered and unformed
no telling the difference of what is yet to come
cold and unkind
discouraged and down
all about is doubt
my own life is a jigsaw puzzle
never telling the fate of time
but all my life is doubtful and bleak
nowhere to turn
who once was by my side fled as danger approaches
who once was my friend claimed now to never known me
i want to be myself
but i want everyone to like me
it's like i want to stand out but not alone either
how can i decide?
between those choices now
i am torn
A contest entry
- Poems About Poetry or Poets by CarolDesjarlais.
1200 points, ended September 11, 2008, 18 entries
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what do you think? please, don't be too cruel; nobody's perfect.
Comments
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wow very full of emotion i loved it great write thanks for the enerty...
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I think you've expressed yourself well here. Great job.
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the poem has a shattered rythm to it, which fits well with your topic. thank you for entering.
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