These are...
-A gnarly rotten splinter, buried
in the darkest nooks of my mind;
my vice.
-A hidden love duet,
two souls frolicking like
melody and harmony.
-A parasitic habit, always
right beneath my skin,
itching and irritating and
leeching.
-A silver moment,
pristine and crisp,
delicate in its beauty and
solitude.
-A dark lurker, ceaselessly
prowling, leering and ravenous and
all-consuming
fear.
-A golden memory, laughter ringing
pleasantly, a placid afternoon in
the company of friends.
-Fierce desire, fiery conviction,
unquenchable thirst, a forever feeling,
life force and unshackled energy,
fervor and passion.
...my secrets.
Author notes
I have no idea which one of my poems is my "best pome", so I just uploaded my most recent one.
I wrote about my secrets in general.
In All This Chaos We Found Safety
superl337sauce
A contest entry
- Mosaic by Ms. Black Eyeliner.
700 points, ended September 18, 2008, 27 entries
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550 points, ended July 9, 169 entries
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900 points, ended July 16, 80 entries
Honorable mention
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Please tell me what you think
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Excellent. Best one I have read in a while in my opinion. I do like it very much. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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Thanks so much for entering.
[if you end up in the finals I will comment better]
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cool... i like this!
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Judged-ola!
this is great. one of my faves of yours. -
i think this was really good it has a nice flow . I like the way it is worded i think you did a good job thank you for posting to the reading list
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Well this is interesting...the ideas really get me! My favourite verses are the first and the next to last ones!! Great use of language and good write! Thanks for entering!
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im not sure what to say. thank you for entering, thank you sharing. i will not dq you but please put your ap name in the AN.
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I love this poem!
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i know what you mean about chosing your bast poem it's not easy, never mind this is a very good poem and i enjoyed reading thanks for posting
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"A silver moment,
pristine and crisp,
delicate in its beauty and
solitude."
--This is so easy to see, great job with imagery in this piece!!
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"A hidden love duet,
two souls frolicking like
melody and harmony."
i love the description
good luck in the contest
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