There's a song of 7 Things
Parts of a boy she hates and likes
But making a list that small
Just doesn't seem to feel right
For each bullet on a list
Is another piece of you
Wrapping it up in seven
Isn't something I could do
One: the way you look when you grasp a concept
Two: your voice when it says my name
Three: your hair in disarray when you overslept
Four: your smile when you win your game
Fifty-three: the way you chew on your pencil
Fifty-four: the way I can't look away
Fifty-five: the way you're simply so simple
Fifty-six: how you always know what to say
Two-oh-five: your eyes when they gaze into mine
Two-oh-six: um, two words: your arms
Two-oh-seven: you can only draw a crooked line
Two-oh-eight: your comforting Southern charms
I could go on and on all day
But that would be a waste of time
Even though it would be easy
'Cause darling, you're sublime
All that I can really do
Is sit back and enjoy these pieces of you
Author notes
Ehhh I didn't like this one much, but it's something I had to say. The rhymes are lameeee. +Sorry about the colors, but they have to do with the inspiration of the poem ('cause it just needed another piece of him)
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Comments
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I can relate to this, it kind of reminds me of the time I wrote a list of pros and cons of going out with these 3 guys and deciding which would be better in long run. Was 15 and naive then. What I didn't realise was, they all sucked. But sometimes it goes the opposite and they are both great
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I like how you used the song to start off and to be inspired. It's nice.
And I love the poem itself. Beautiful.
Thanks for sharing and keep it up.
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