Don't say I never tried,
I really did,
to hold out with you,
until the end.
--but the pain...
I never noticed what you've done,
until that night,
I was home alone...
--the blood...
You hit me so hard, my head spun around,
and I went sprawling to the ground.
--no more love...
i can't love you anymore,
I hate you,
I love you,
I know I'm better off without you.
Author notes
Also true...I did learn though...
*Walls-within*
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Enkeli.
400 points, ended September 8, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? Anything I can work on?
Comments
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Abusive relatinships... yeah, I can realllly relate to this. This was relatively short, but quite emotional... at least for me. Thank you for such an honest entry.
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Enkeli -
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Thank you for your honest oppinon. I really hope this is something you were looking for...
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