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still

injections of life lead the disease of depression
rejected strife equaling emotional repression
in succession minds go blind and left to waste
flavored labors…the world never knows the taste
foundations crumble… the hand that fed strikes
sensations tumble, damned now the hand writes
freedom of stress press upon mentals of captives
bleeding ink, lost prophetics forever remain active
midnite thoughts fought til addiction bought
endless penning, penned passions sought
exercises in futility, sweat and blood spill
forgotten is the prophet… writing still.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    September 6, 2008
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    Wow, my this is entrancing, thanks for your entry and good luck in my contest lol