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Puzzle of Your Heart

Just give me a moment
To decifer the meaning
In both our rambaling words
I feel like this is just
Making our feelings more confusing
But there is one simple thing
In all the implied meanings
And that is I love you

I want to know whats going on
In the confines of your head
And I'm dieing to know
How you feel
And how I fit into the puzzle
Of your heart
Next to the other pieces

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  • phillyhottpockets
    September 7, 2008

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    i know our conversations constatnly make things more confusing but yes i do love you and you fit right in to the center of my heart

  • SilentMoonlight
    September 5, 2008
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    Wow. This piece really strikes home with something I'm going through right now; you worded everything so simply yet perfect in a way that everyone could probably relate to this in some way or another. Only thing I could find wrong with this is some typos. Other than that

    Great job!

    Jordanne