Hey stupid girl,
I see you crying.
I see the dark twisted pain through those Smokey shadowed eyes.
I see your lonesome and your guilt beneath those sad pretty eyes.
I see your black empty soul's silent cries in your eyes.
I see you everyday,
With each time, feeds my hate.
I can no longer endure your face.
Its no wonder you feel displaced.
I see you drink til you're a waste.
A waste in this beautiful perfect space.
I don't like you,
No one does.
Why don't you have some more vodka,
Get a good buzz.
I'm sure you're gonna need it when you get home tonight.
Home to your dark empty house,
With no one but yourself to fight.
So now you are home in your cold solitair.
Tell me now girl,
Did that vodka numb your despair?
I guess not, cuz you're still fuckin crying!
Give it up stupid girl,
It aint worth trying!
You're a waste of space.
A typical "nutt case".
Just leave, get out of here!
Put an end to your deepest fear.
That you are nothing,
And always will be.
How much longer will it take for you to see?
Hey stupid girl,
Put your trust in me.
I'm the girl in the mirror you wake up to see.
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"I see the dark twisted pain through those Smokey shadowed eyes... "
GREAT WRITE!
this feels.. familiar ^.^;
gah. i dunno how to explain it but i feel like.. i can relate to this write. >.>
Ahem. ^_^ anway..
lol you are wicked talented, meh friend! XD <3
keep it up, ne?
-Rayne
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I try lol.
Anyway thanx so much,
I appreciate it truely.
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I know
I know from experience that it never works. It may dull the senses briefly but then it brings on only more sadnees and depression. the bottle, somethin I have battled with most of my life, can weaken even the strogest of us and break the hearts of those that care. bUt I find writing does help. So write on young poet and good luck.
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Hello eves shadow,
This was a really strong write.. Very personal.. I'm sure that a lot of people will be able to relate to this piece..The imagery was vivid and detailed.. I like the ending.. It really brought this piece together.. Thank you very much for sharing this with us here on Allpoetry.. Hope to read much more from you in the near future!Keep up the good work!
Jetleena
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I'm so glad you found it to your liking.
Thanks for reading.
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Aww you guys are too *sweet!
I really appreciate friendship offers.
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this is a great poem. you are a very good poet. just keep going on life, and try to stay strong. don't show the world that you are falling apart inside. if you do that, it will beat down on yhou over and over again.
i'm here if you ever need somsone to talk to ^^
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Well I'm glad you guys like it. I was inspired by a dark time in my life, I guess I can say I kinda still struggle with it from time 2 time but its not as bad as it was then. Anyway thanks for reading
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omg this poem is soo good, but i want you to know that everyone is worth something, and if you ever need to talk or you just need a friend, message me!
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hey
i loved this poem its full of sadness but more pain!! i can relate to this poem and ja its not a great feeling at all actually it fucking sucks!! anyway i hope your ok and this is truely a great write!!
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