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Voiceless Love

Oh! How I long to hear your
voice...
We speak everyday but no words
are spoken...
This voiceless love...
Will it leave me alone and
heart broken?

Oh! How is it one can love one
that has no voice?
To communicate thru writing letters...
This voiceless love...
How can this be?

Oh! How badly I want to speak to
you...
A simple call...
Is this the beginning of a terrible
or
a great and wonderful fall...

Oh! What should one do?
My voiceless indigo love...
I long to hear your voice...
A simple call is all...
But such a hard choice...


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  • sweet innocence
    September 10, 2008

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    Amazing!

    i can hear ur longings pretty well! ur words flow wonderfully, giving ur poem such a strong voice though the love u yearn 4 is voiceless.cathchy title, loved it!

    Oh! How badly I want to speak to
    you...
    A simple call...
    Is this the beginning of a terrible
    or
    a great and wonderful fall...
    I enjoyed reading every single part of it and i've felt it all. 11/10 Fantastic piece of work


  • trekkergirl
    September 10, 2008
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    This is interesting. Thanks for sharing it.