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My Arch Enemy the Pigeon

Batman has his bird
The Penguin foe is his curse
Pigeons wait for me

I can’t leave my house
They’re waiting, watching for me
I have to run out

Constantly in fear
No lie, this truly is real
What drops from the air


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  • Swan song gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Dam pigeons Tahnk you for etnering I while i like the poem and the humor it does not fit what I consider a hiaku. All three hiaku should be differnt poems with a slight mention ever so slight of the season and you should not be as much as possible in the poem.
    An aha moment is very very important