Beyond the moon where melodies flow,
I am drawn to the mysteries that wait.
Wisdom is lost upon this fool in love,
passion arises within, becomes sate.
Deep into depths of my own reality,
can not fathom life without a sad song.
Perhaps because I have sung solo,
seems like an eternity, much too long.
Love on Earth so distant and elusive,
does it wait for me in dark of night?
Catapult me through time and space,
upon my music let me take flight.
Play a love song this midnight hour,
heartstrings plucked one by one.
Mind takes me far beyond the moon.
love beckons when twilight is done.
Author notes
Picture Prompt by ...Maldicion_Divina_by_medusa04@deviantart.com
I can be an AP sister or an aunt.
In a list
A contest entry
- Family Matters-pic prompt by Shadow Lynx.
900 points, ended September 21, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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That was so good.. I realy liked it. Smooth and easy to read and see.
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lovely poem. enjoyed reading it this afternoon.
hope you're having a good day
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
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Hello There!!!
A very nice coment. Thank you for reading. Have a great day. Smiles.
Bless You,
Sandy
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beautiful grammy
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Thank you Sweet Emmy
You always bring grammy a smile when you stop by. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Hugs and Smiles for you.
Bless You,
Love You, Grammy
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Wonderful Sandy...your words give music to her thoughts as she plays alone. Almost makes the music come alive to the ears as your read along ang get caught up in the thougths.
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Great Comment
Thank you for the nice comment June. Hugs and Smiles to you this weekend. Take care, Sandy
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This has wonderful rhyme second and fourth line for each quatrain. The reader is taken on a sad journey where wisdom is abandon for love. Elusive in the dark of night will the music catch love to pluck the heart when twlight is over. Gentle hearts guard their lives as solo is sung. Powerful and creative for the reader to take on this walk through the music of the night.
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Wonderful Comment Dan
So glad you enjoyed the walk through the nusic of the night in my poem.
Always nice to have you pop in. Thank you friend You take care. Blessings
Always, Sandy
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Beautiful Sandy, i saw her as a lonely figure playing to her dreams in this write and you show her light and hope at the end , exquisite my new Aunty thank you so much for your entry
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My Sweet Nephew
Dear Graham, It is such an honor to be your Aunt Sandy. I am always here for you. You are a dear friend too. Thank you for being you.
Bless You,
Sandy
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