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I am
The aching gut
The arthritic knuckle
The corneal abrasion

And you are
The weight of my skeleton
The strain of flesh
The cartilage in my knees

And I am
The poison marrow
The glacial pulse
The creaking spine

And you are
The breathing
The digesting
The pulsing automation

And I am
The webbed foot
The degenerate tissue
The aural hallucination

And you are
Two Hundred Six bones harder
Five Hundred Twelve ounces heavier
Six Hundred Thirty Nine fibers stronger

Than the space between us.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Unforgotten
    September 5, 2008
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    intense

    not sure what to take from this... a sense of separation and sadness...wow