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Bittersweet Romance



 

A succulent simple pleasure
of luscious, divine delight
continually captivating
my desires to peak with temptation

sweet, smooth,
yet creamy creature,
arouses my lapped lips; 
tantalizing tongue in panted heat
as the anticipation rises with indulgence

slowly savoring its melting essence
with unswerving devotion,
I sigh
upon completion

consciously devouring
without a care
our next nibbling rendezvous
of delicious passion,
is but a moment away

lingering in love
upon my hips

forever~

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: Destination Switzerland
Pleasure Option: Chocolate YUM!

Cheese and milk chocolate are two quintessential Swiss products that are derived from the massive dairy industry.
Nestlé S.A., Switzerland’s largest single employer, and Lindt, are major manufacturers of chocolate products. Dozens of other Swiss chocolate manufacturers are known regionally and internationally.
© 1993-2003 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved.

Okay...lol so I love chocolate

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  • poppa
    September 20, 2008

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    Chocolate ?? I knew it was about chocolate wonderful write with a very steamy feel (fans himself)


    • jasminerose
      September 20, 2008
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      Yes.. this was about chocolate lol So glad you enjoyed this one and had to fan yourself too
      Thanks!
      Linda


  • anaisnais
    September 17, 2008

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    ooohhh lala... its getting hot in here and the chocolates melted, naughty and nice....but temptingly written in a very clever way! lol. well done! s ;D

    • jasminerose
      September 17, 2008
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      lol Thanks Sis When aren't we naughty when it comes to "sweet" things???
      Thank you for the wonderful compliment, I am so glad it could stir up the heat for ya!!
      Linda

  • Tercarro
    September 15, 2008
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    This flows likes river of honeym slowy yet succulent to the very end. Loved it.


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    September 15, 2008

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    oh, you evil temptress!! after reading this i was mad for chocolate, i'll have to break into my emergency stash and have my way with it, lol.

    excellent!!

    • jasminerose
      September 17, 2008
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      Well good thing sweet lady that you have some emergency stash laying around Sooo do you share??
      Thanks for the wonderful comment, as I am always mad for chocolate
      Linda


  • Confusedboy
    September 8, 2008

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    hahaha, what a sweet write. Been to Switzerland, enjoyed the chocolates, very nice. Sees Candy, in this country, are second to none. England also have tasty chocolates, as well as France and etc. This was sweet, tasty and ohhh delicious.Yummy,
    You just spoiled a perfectly good day.

    • jasminerose
      September 14, 2008
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      lol Yes, this subject is definitely a deliciously sweet one indeed! Thank you for the wonderful comment!!! It is always a pleasure to hear from you!
      Linda


  • Jersene gold member
    September 7, 2008

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    delectable...both this poem, and yummy chocolate!!! Lovely penning

    • jasminerose
      September 7, 2008
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      Thank you so very much Jersene for the delightful comment!! lol I guess I am not alone when it comes to loving chocolate
      It is always so wonderful to hear from you!!!
      Linda


  • Frozentearz
    September 7, 2008

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    Bittersweet Romance
    ha ha a wonderful bitter sweet romance
    loved your author notes also, wonderful chocolate flow.
    good thing I have some at my desk..
    Thanks for joining in.
    Warm thoughts.
    Frozentearz

    • jasminerose
      September 7, 2008
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      Yes lol A bittersweet romance I think plenty of us can relate to!
      I am so delighted you enjoyed this one and had some handy for some romance too
      Always a pleasure to be here! Thank you for the wonderful compliment
      Linda


  • moonbumps silver member
    September 6, 2008

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    YUMMY!!!!! Give me a hundred boxes of this!!!!!
    xxxxxxxxxxxHilly


    • jasminerose
      September 6, 2008

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      I will send them asap lol thank you for the comment
      Linda xo


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Speaking as a chocolate lover, this is delicious!
    hehe
    What a clever way to describe heavenly milky goodness

    I love this!
    See ya in the next round! I am going to see if I can find some chocolate!
    mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    great job, bff


    Lynda

    • jasminerose
      September 6, 2008
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      AHA! A chocolate lover huh??? lol Like I didn't know that!!
      Glad you enjoyed this one as I was eating some when writing, thought it would offer even more insight... ahem...lol
      Thanks BFF
      Jazzy

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