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Under The Bed

As you get older,you start to mature.
But for some reason,we can't look under the bed.
I always think there is something under there.
Like a giant spider,an ugly monster,or something scary.
I don't even like putting my shoes under there.
Just the feeling get makes me creeped out.
So no matter how old you are,you know that you can act like a kid and be afraid of looking under the bed.
"No matter how old you are,you always think that there may be something under the bed."    Monica,Age 13


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  • xochocoholicxo
    June 23, 2009
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    by monica?

  • miss lyss-kiss
    January 12, 2009
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    i know.i feel the same way.i cant stand looking under da bed.its jst is reely scary


  • Scyphon
    November 8, 2008

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    Thats a good one, and very true. With that we always wonder whats down there, what is it that creeps us out, what really is there watching us or maocking us.


  • BloodSeeker Lette
    October 30, 2008
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    I like it alot, but I can't look under my bed because it is on the floor.


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    October 27, 2008
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    This is really cute and something that I think many people in today's world can relate to. We all have our own fears deep down inside and no matter how silly the world may think it is, it will always be a part of us.

    Wonderful thought for this contest and I love the way that you put this together! Thanks a lot for sharing it here and keep up the wonderful work!





    Jeremy0826


  • MD Masroor
    October 22, 2008
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    Lovely imagery here! haha! keep it going!


  • Anyajoellienne
    October 12, 2008
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    Yes excellent details
    now I have an excuse not to look under the beds


  • XartistXinXhidingX
    September 28, 2008
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    LOL

    I LOVED! it!!!!! it is sooooo true!


  • LionessK silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    Good luck in the contest!

    This made me smile a bit. I was one of those who firmly believed there was "something" under the bed just waiting to grab my legs and pull me under.
    You did a good job here.
    Thank you for entering the contest.
    Keep writing on.


    ~Kristy

  • roxy101
    September 14, 2008
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    this is sooooooo true and u did a good job explaning it.hope u win in the contest good luck


  • Mystery
    September 7, 2008
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    LOL very good. This was very amusing for me I never was worried about stuff under my bed cause I know they couldn't fit with all my junk under there, but I was always afraid of what was in my closet. Oh and on the last line u had a typo under is spelt wrong.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Lol very witty with such a great message for all kids. You did this wonderfully. I really enjoyed you piece.
    If you could put which quote you used in your NOTES, that would be great
    Thanks you so much for entering this contest.
    Gaylene

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