Guided by sea scents
a blue line over his eyes:
a wet edge from food
Silver souls swim by
the sun creates fake signals
salty, hard to find
Raw as the sea's tide
a scream for hunting rises
requiem for death
Author notes
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A contest entry
- KINGFISHER HAIKU by Swan song.
2600 points, ended September 5, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your words are beautiful but I think I'm a little too tired to completely understand / look into the meaning. Which is strange to me, because I usually understand everything completely on my first try.
I think it might be about someone trying to fish for food.
I'm tired. -
Sweet. This really took me away. Thanks.
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I think the first poem was very good. I do like this overall very good thnak you for entering
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