We are all dancing
beneath the stars
of heaven
sometimes we waltz alone
living breathless,
longing to dance
in the arms of another.
The soul feels joy
and may laugh
even in private solitude,
but by evenings
autumn moonlight
I dream of another.
My heart sings
whispered melodies
as I dance in step
my shadow
dreaming
of holding love
and dancing
with a princess.
In motions sachet
we move in rhythm,
the beat in our chest
resonates loves elegance,
life's waltzing pace spins
in each others arms
we feel complete,
dancing in
loves moonlight
beneath heavens
Autumn
stars.
Author notes
Word Bank:
Complete
Soul
Heaven
Love
Dancing
Stars
Moonlight
Autumn
Pick at least 5 of the words to write your poem with!
In a list
A contest entry
- ~ You Complete Me... by Nature Song.
515 points, ended September 22, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sigh...Dancing in the Autumn beneath the stars! Somethimes we dance alone...wishing to be in the arms of another. Dreams can become real...if only one wishes. Lovely poem. Very interesting departure from your norm. ~Sie
Good luck in the contest.
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thank for
How have you been? thiongs have been quite rocky for me as of late I'm still winging it though. Amazing how things can seem so in control and suddenly you can be completely blown out of the saddle. Goes to show that worrying about being secure or loosing what we feel secure woith isn't all that it is cracked up to be, sad too .
Thanks for the bronze
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Magnificent!
A wonderful rendition of the word bank contest! You excel in write's of moonlight dancing and the romancing that makes a truly genuine masterpiece all your own that no one can match! The wording is magnificent as are the lines "We are all dancing beneath the stars of heaven, some times we waltz alone""my shadow dreaming and holding love and dancing with a princess" Your specialty is seen here in this write. Great brother!
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I see you entered my sister Sie's contest! Lovely poem. A waltz for two under a Autumn harvest moon. Where love takes its first step into completness. Sigh's! Awesome write, love the picture you choose.
Cari
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