The Journey

I thank you lord
for wings so pure.
My pain is gone,
and tears no more.

Soft angels voice
sings in my ear,
and smell of roses
quells my fear.

I see your light,
just up ahead.
Im coming lord,
to rest my head.

But just one thing

before i go,

lord am i dead?

I didnt know...

In a list

Spiritual • next in list

A contest entry

Pic prompt ~ Pen me something beautiful by Riamh. 550 points, ended September 8, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

http://eireen.deviantart.com/art/Fairy-Light-20646125

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nevadapoet
September 25, 2008

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nice dance in imagery little brother. A well deserved winner, congrats!!
Your Big sis,
ShellyS
Cynthia Gaines
September 10, 2008

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Outstanding!!!
WOW!!! You amaze me with your solid, gifted muse's creativity!!! I hope you do well in the contest!!! Peace, Cyn
Riamh
September 6, 2008
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Now that IS something! A wonderful write. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Slayer
Arkbear
September 6, 2008

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Wow....some real depth surfaces here.....lots to ponder Graham ~

That pic sure enhances this write.....or.....is it the other way around?

Looking at it makes me take flight in your thoughts......I wish you the best with this entry.....so good to read you again.....everything from Presentation to Tone is remarkable,

God bless,

Bear ~
Clovis...Curious
September 5, 2008

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Excellent
Most intriguing, indeed. I'm not a christian, yet I thought you expressed yourself, quite well. Thanks for sharing.