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a free love concept

i am under the curse of having to know myself
every inch, every detail
i am deep seated, i am a breeze
ideas motions and your hands
can seep through me
curvature, i do not deny
can intise me
but as fickled fins raise
i will watch my marks fade from our passing
and breathe free
without your heart beating beside
an easy step taken in the freedom i reside

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  • underdose
    September 8, 2008
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    ooOOOoooo very deep and thoughful, I like it a lot =P xxxx lurve