Set my body on fire with the touch of your tongue,
bringing out sensational heat rivaling the sun.
Sweet caress of hands roughens in passion's wake,
awakening moisture's coil in the most secret space.
Create within the whimpering moan of carnal need,
Clawing heat seeks to climb as arching bodies meet.
Enter into the hidden cove of the sacred pool,
my professor of your own sensual school.
Carnal lust leads to more as lessons continue on,
Rolling over with me on top, giving a control lesson.
Hands hold firm as the ride goes on,
Control thrown to the wind.
Shouting screams ride the waves
receding to rise again.
Author notes
Two lovers on the sand, one experienced, one.... let's just leave it there.
A contest entry
- Bring on the Heat! - Adults only by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended September 18, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ah, the beach, nice visuals here, loved it!
MJ.
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Tuen up the sparks a bit more- flames may shoot from the monitor with continued thoughts here! LOL. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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All i can say is keep it flowing my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Holy cow! Is this a passionate and seductive piece?! If I had to tell you which part I liked the best, I'd have to cut and copy the whole darn thing. Loved it! Well done. Good luck in the contest!
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thank you so much for the kind words! I really appreciate them as lately my muse has been on what seems to be a permanent vacation.
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