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I will d.e.s.t.r.o.y you

I
Come
    Home
AnD lOoK iN tHe MiRrOr
What do I see?
U.G.L.Y.
[Fat]
y.
  o.
    u.
      a.
        r.
          e.
            s.
              t.
                u.
                  p.
                    i.
                      d.
You are (d.i.s.g.u.s.t.i.n.g)
I tell myself
Throw_it_up
F-o-o-d is dirty
((You are dirty))
~Throw it up now~
Empty y o u r s e l f
G.
  O.
    O.
      D.
Now //bleed\\
B/l/e/e/d you ugly BiTcH
It’s what you d_e_s_e_r_v_e
Cut [deeper] this time
D*e*s*t*r*o*y*Y*o*u*r*s*e*l*f
You’re n.o.t.h.i.n.g
Worthless…
So [[bleed]]
Bleed F|O|R|E|V|E|R
N
  o
    w
      R
        u
          n
Get rid of that {fat}
Run f a s t e r
Run f a r t h e r
Nobody \\likes// you
Fatty
You must be b+e+t+t+e+r
You must be s^r^o^n^g^e^r
Go home now
Weigh yourself, see if you passed
...
You failed
O.n.l.y #one# pound lost
You're FAT!!!!
Do 50 push-ups
And 50 more
Now go to B E D
W
  A
    K
      E
        U
          P
//And\\
Repeat|taepeR
Because I {(Own)} you
I am ana
And I will d.e.s.t.r.o.y. you

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  • black-tears
    November 2, 2008
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    this is REALLY amazing! I think lotsa people can relate


  • SarahElizabeth
    October 25, 2008
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    It really tells the story of someone in this situation. Great!

  • oooooooooooooooooo
    October 1, 2008
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    I love it!!!


  • ninchick08
    September 28, 2008

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    crazy good doll!! i love the dirty pretty style to it. the content im feeling. its a wretched way to live, but you become dependent on it, and its the only way to live then. I wish you luck with your demons, good write!!

  • Xana.leave.me.X
    September 18, 2008
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    This is amazing!! i

  • X ShatteredSoul X
    September 15, 2008

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    np, do you actually have problems with aneroxia/bullimia?? cuz i do so if you ever wanna talk just message me

    • Le Fille Morte
      September 28, 2008
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      Yea, i do. I've been dealing though, trying to mend and such. i take my anger out with writing, it really helps.

  • X ShatteredSoul X
    September 8, 2008
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    omg, you poem is amazing!!

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