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Screaming Confession

Shout to the skys,
Scream out your lungs,
Tell God every Sin youve achived
Every murder, every time
You popped those poison pills.
Or drank the bitter sweet nectar.
Slurring your speech.
Dont swallow your tongue.

Or every time you dragged that dazzling metal,
across your clean-cut wrist.
Every time you spilled your blood.
Or every time you lied.

This is your Screaming Confession.

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meh, i was bored, its not very good.

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  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    December 30, 2008

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    oh wow, i really like this poem. it speaks alot to the heart. i think it's a very beautiful and dark poem. Good job. :]]


  • Ginjar420
    December 5, 2008

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    Excuse me? Could you stop writing great poems send the word's to my finger's and let me type them out? Seriously i love this poem "This is your screaming confession" in fact I'm going to read it at least two more times! Amazing!


  • spideracer gold member
    October 17, 2008
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    You're right about it being not that good but there is a darkness screaming to get out, perhaps revising this poem might give it that extra bit of emotion needed here.

  • Dangerousparable silver member
    September 6, 2008
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    It gets the point across

    could you check out some of my older works please?
    I like the darkness behind this one