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implosion

all this confusion
massive intrusion
of the brain
i cant let it go

i try to make rid
its sealed tight as a lid
and there's no way
for this to end

i love him i hate him
he lies then i forgive
anger his weapon
to put me in place

x husband comes frontline
apology has become mine
to forgive the mistakes
of who i am today

you both have created me
this girl who is unfree
you laugh as i cry
while i hide in the dark

my stress is imploding
my head is corroding
in repetition i plea
please both go away
before i end up insane



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  • ModernXTimes
    September 15, 2008
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    Okay I won't critique.

    First I must say welcome to AP!

    Secondly, I must say I like what you have here. It's sad and heartfelt and that's all you can really ask from a poet. Keep up the good work and hoep to see mroe of you in the future!

    sincerely,
    modernxtimes