Mighty eagle, of
Coastal plains, predator of
Fish underwater.
Soaring o'er the land,
Magestic wings extended,
Eyes scanning the ground.
Perched on a branch,
Surveying its kingdom, like
A royal bird king.
Author notes
Here's a linked haiku. 3 haikus in 1 poem.
A contest entry
- KINGFISHER HAIKU by Swan song.
2600 points, ended September 5, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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It had a nice flow to it. Almost as if the bird was your friend and you knew it well. Nice job.
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Very good imagery but there is a difference in painting a pciture and writing a hiaku you have the gernal idea but remember you want to put a moment of wow! in your poem what is considered a moment of enlightenment. It is a hit and miss things so it is not easy to get, but when you do you will know it.
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