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Sweet Oneness

You hold me,
with a firefighter's strength,
as I am rescued from the ills of life
I let myself this once to succumb
to the way my heart leads.

You speak to me in quiet whispers
and my soul,like a slave master
beats upon the wall of my conscience
as my will becomes entwined
with yours.

I feel you
an invigorating source
that pumps loads of love
into my fragile cells.

I touch you
and in one glimpse
The heavens waves her magic stick
as she commands stars of love
to paint the night sky.

I speak and your heart in perfect understanding
nods her head
and I smile,
for finally,my fairy godmother has shown me her face
I watch you,
the once who holds the keys to my heart,
the once who spiraled my world to start
the masterpiece, a work of art

I feel myself,

Complete.

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  • Nature Song silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    I feel you , I touch you and you make my life complete! Very well done. It's a shame that other's did not comment on your poem. That was part of the rules! Good luck in the contest ~Sie