You complete my heart
With every puzzle piece;
every part
You are my shimmering stars that dance
In the clouds of heaven,
Lost in your marvelous trance
You are my fantasy come true
My feelings of love
fulfilled by you
You are the doorway to my soul
You are the diamond from my coal
My puzzled heart is finally whole
You are moonlight peering from behind the autumn clouds
scattered across the deep grey sky
Without you;
my fragile heart would die
Together we complete the puzzle, of you and I
Author notes
wordbank
Complete
Soul
Heaven
Love
Dancing
Stars
Moonlight
Autumn
A contest entry
- ~ You Complete Me... by Nature Song.
515 points, ended September 22, 2008, 14 entries
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Together we complete the puzzle you and I. Interesting for life sure takes many twists and turns, such as a puzzle. Good luck in our contest. ~Sie
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Beautiful Poem!!!!!
You have penned a very lovely love poem with the word bank. A delight to read. Best of luck. Should be a winnner. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Very good. You amaze me everytime. Keep up the wonderful writing.
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Lots of nice imagery here. It's like jazz lyrics about dancing.
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i love this it is extremly good..kep writing..ur awesome
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aww this is extremely cute! i wish sumone would rite this about me
lol i ish jealous. good job and good luck in the contest
christina
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maybe it is about you
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oh really? lol
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you are my potatoes deep fried
without you i would have died -
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yummm
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