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Star struck

star struck eyes fall from comet's dust
  blazing through the night's sky
with warm touch and soft hands
  lovers practice age old dances
senseless to surrounding world.

  flower petals cover bare skin
breatheless impatience joins sweet cavities
  beads of sweat cover silken sheets
My star struck eyes fall into you
  with every whisper blown upon our ears
laying on a bed of roses...
  the roses' thorns pierce the skin
bleeding
  we find our addiction with the touch
of our soft skin connecting
  growing as close as any human being can grow
and hearts satisfied when the addiction
  is coupled with universal truth and trust
the way true love has always blossomed.

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  • schellou
    September 19, 2008
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    lovely

  • silverfish
    September 9, 2008

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    reaching for the stars, finding intimacy at your fingertips, very spiritual/sensual work you have crafted here, ms. roses. - phish

  • hose30
    September 7, 2008
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    this is amazing again. It exceeds all expectation.Truly a piece of art.Great job again sis.