Moonlight at midnight glowing enhancing,
harvest moon of autumn, lovers dancing.
Heavenly feelings in arms wrapped tight,
stars shine down upon loving souls tonight.
Swaying to music, makes evening complete,
heart pounding faster with passionate beat.
When music stops, their love will play on,
dancing to the rhythm of desire till dawn.
Author notes
WORD BANK...
Complete Soul Heaven Love Dancing Stars Moonlight Autumn
In a list
A contest entry
- ~ You Complete Me... by Nature Song.
515 points, ended September 22, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Dancing to to the rhythm as the dawn light begins to shie. Lovely pic and background. Time in a bottle! So is love as seen and felt here in this poem. Good luck in our contest. ~Sie
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This piece has a great flow to it and uses the word bank in a way that integrates them well with what you are saying. A very romantic piece that expresses what it's like to dance with a partner who enjoys it as much as you do.
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Thank You!
Your coment was wonderful. So glad you enjoyed. Thank you for dropping by.
You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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This is beautiful...
You always amaze me with your creativity! The flow is incredibly natural, considering your prompt was a word bank. Great job!! Best of luck in this contest!!! Take care, Cyn
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Hello Cyn
Always nice to hear from you.I appreciate your thoughts on my poetry. You have a beautiful weekend. Smiles!!!!!!!
Bless You,
Sandy
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Lovely use of the word bank and brings the reader into the work dancing and holding on to love in the dark with passion till dawn. Wonderful write.
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Hello Dan
Such a delight to read your thoughts. I apreciate you reading my poetry and leaving lovely comments that encourage. They always bring smiles to a cloudy day. Hugs and Smiles for a dear friend. Take care.
Bless You, Sandy
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awsome, i loved this poem, i like how you have used that picture in there too, i love how this poem actually uses the dance litlterly, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing
~Amy
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Wonderful Coment
I appreciate you stopping by. Thank you for reading and commenting. Take care, Sandy
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