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And So I Shall Tell You

I may write you small love letters,
in many different languuages.
though you cannot know, i keep them all in a box.
someday we will wake up,
i believe i am dreaming.
you are so lovely,
i am so grotesque.
but still you say you love me,
and i love you none the less.
je t'aime plus que le soleil et les étoiles,
And so i shall tell you what this means.
i love you more than the sun and the stars,
and the moon if you would say.
i love you more than anything,
so much,
that i cannot explain.


Author notes

i chose to write about a secret.

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  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 5, 2008

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    "je t'aime plus que le soleil et les étoiles" lmao tee hee i have a weakness for french tee hee

    "i love you more than anything,
    so much,
    that i cannot explain." awww hoe freaking sweet that lucky bitch lmao jk jk

    but any way

    great poem

    good luck in the contest