being by myself throughout the day, i don't mind,
going places, doing things that fill my time,
i don't know why but through the day, it feels alright,
then the lonliness is ushered in with the coming of the night,
going to bed without you, it doesn't feel right,
going to bed without you could take all night.
being at home with my music on is always o.k,
i see my friends and have some fun throughout the day,
i know where you are and why your there, i know you are alright,
but then it comes around again, the coming of the night,
when going to bed without you doesn't feel right,
going to bed without you could take all night
because going to bed without you is not right.
Author notes
angie was visiting her sister?
A contest entry
- a night without you.... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 15 entries
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Yes I do agree and you have described it so truthfully my friend...and thank you so much for sharing.. -
well written
Those lonely times of waiting, i am glad there over,
Wonderfull write thank you for sharing
Good luck to you
Rend The Veil
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thankyou for your kind words
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I like the rhyming couplet at the end of each verse but I think you need to do some more proofreading!
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thankyou and yes i should but sometimes i go with the flow of the words and forget
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