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The New Batman Verses The Dark Knight

Year 2008 ,
a time where teens truly rate.
Washed their hands from teachers of their time,
the new Batman Verses the dark knight .

The dark knights the street corners is  their lair ,
watching and sucking in the young with such flair .
Where discipline has been cast aside,
now our Batmen of today shrivel and die .

What was once the kings of the land ,
today chose the dark knight in which to hold hands .
You see them and hear them cry out in pain,
yet instead of freedom they call out his name .

The young now lives within the computer age,
leaving love behind for a taste of rage.
Led by the dark knight through the deadliest of games,
it's the way he takes them with little re-frame

The walking dead led through addiction you see,
takes them while young and feeling need .
Where are the creators of the Batmen forever after,
in a world that has forgotten family for madness and laughter .

 

Some are saved yet their friends move on,

with the dark knights promise its love it needs a home.

To glide within the veins and make you fly,

yet going down hill fast with blinded eyes.

 

The Batmen of today unled and often unloved,

its a waste and the dark knights feels its just enough.

To add to his kingdom through whispers and disquise,

where death looks apealing to the addicts eyes .

 

They see not those reaching out to save them today ,

violently often they will push love away.

For the whispers becomes louder as the dark knight takes hold,

and destroyes from within until their souls are sold.

 

 

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  • dillpickle62
    September 6, 2008

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    WOW!!!!

    I really dig this this poem! It's great! How you used both the Dark Knight and Batman. Best wishes in this contest. Really a wonderful piece of poetry!

  • goalsv
    September 5, 2008
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    A perfect discription using the two movies in metephoric manner.


  • Redeemed15
    September 5, 2008
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    love it! hope that you do awesome in the contest. your a wonderful poet. great job.


  • Star Shine
    September 5, 2008

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    "To glide within the veins and make you fly,
    yet going down hill fast with blinded eyes" I think that phrase is absolutely wonderful, it is so eloquent. This is all so true, great metaphor you have created here.


  • Wall Door Salad
    September 5, 2008
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    love the analogy between the movie and real life. gr8 job

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