Why do you still haunt my dreams,
you only brings me tears it seems,
How do I forget a love like ours,
break free your holding powers.
I have tried so many times to say,
goodbye to you and walk away.
Another new dawn has arrived,
another sad dark night survived.
Will today be the day that I find,
strength to leave this pain behind.
What a fool I am to let you break,
fill my heart with such heartache.
You'll never know how hard I try,
to forget you and say goodbye.
I was someone to pass the time,
playing with this heart of mine.
Why do I still love you so,
still find it hard to let you go?
Too painful to be just a friend,
my pain and tears will never end.
Author notes
Contest Prompt... a night without you....
In a list
A contest entry
- a night without you.... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Your emotions are really the truthful wings of the love..true love....well done..and thank you so much for sharing -
so heart-breaking a read. Which means you got a lot of emotions through to me. Great write.
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Great Comment.
Thank you for stopping by and reading. Take care.
Sandy
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Excellent
Ah, 'tis a fine write indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. -
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Nice Coment
Thank you for reading. I appreciate you stopping by. Take care, Sandy 
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Sad
That write was so true, I can relate to this poem. it very heartbreaking, with a love like this
it leaves you in bondage, and some times it has to take the strength of God, to help us move
pass this, Well written Good Luck to you
Rend The Veil
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Lovely Comment
Thank You for stopping by and reading . Take care, Sandy
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Sometimes if you do say goodbye, you just end up saying hello all over again. I've been there.
Like your write and the border is beautiful.
jjj
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Hello Judyjudyjudy
Sometimes we can never say good bye completely no matter how hard we try. Friends become lovers and then friends again. It is hard but can work if both want it. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. Sandy
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So real to life, slip into question what does it take to break from the past love . To survive beyond the pain and heartache. What love can be found past the tears and sorrow as life forces itself forward into the future.
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Thoughtful Comment
Thank you Dan. It seems I take two steps forward and one back. My mind goes forward but my heart goes backwards. I think it shall always will be this way.
Thank you for always being a friend and encouraging and uplifting with your kindness. Hugs and Smiles.
God Bless You And Yours,
Ssandy
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