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Hey, Summer Man! Kill Off My Tears, Would Ya?

You smell like summer
You taste like chilling ice cream
And your breath is mint

Skin is steel soft love
Tell me what that flava is?
Sing me that one song?

You eat up my pain
Like its your grandma's best cake
You can't get enough

Hey, summer man! Please!
Kill off my tears, would ya? Please?
I'm drying up here


based on -"You are the only one who can make me laugh, when I don't even want to smile."

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 12

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    Sounds to me like you are longing for summer??

    If so , I am right there with ya! Lol...

    Anyways, I like it. It's a great write.


  • unavailable
    September 18, 2008

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    I liked this but I'm also confused.
    Would you give me a little info, please?