I see in you, one with so many sides
many facets, intricately intertwined,
woven, meshed and arranged
personalities created for so many different reasons.
Strength carefully hidden
behind a look of gentility
could be mistaken for timidity
yet never taken for a ride.
Modest
blate
roguish
diffident.
Promises of sweetness
giving off vibes of hardness
unwelcoming
yet needing.
Coy
secretive
furtive
lovely.
Need to be wanted
need to be chased
need to be taken
need to be shaken.
Promises held behind
unwelcoming eyes
yet look deeper and see
promises held for the one who persists.
Fully clothed
yet stark naked
inviting any who dare
into sweet land of promise.
Promises of what you would do for me
if I conquer.
You like a fighter
a winner.
In those eyes I see determination
determination to succeed
determination to be loved
determination to be held.
Erotically unsure
yet a picture of sublime eroticism
capable of stirring even
those dead to passion.
Erotically inspiring
milky white skin
now tingling, reddening all over
goose pimples taking over now.
Touching yourself now
feeling my touch through your fingers.
Electric.
Charged, ready to explode.
Hold on.
I see
pensiveness
fear?
Anger maybe.
Anger bottled up?
Frustrations behind the looks
Too much injury held in
too much sorrow?
I see also
humor
wittiness if allowed
quick with the sharp banters.
Now back to the body
sweet, full of promise
quivering
voice gone husky with desire.
Back to touching through nimble fingers
touches going faster now
kisses imagined
body all aglow with fire.
Gentle fall to reality
fully sated
wondering
where all that came from.
Author notes
Don't know you well enough
to write a poem based on
your portrait, but all my life
i never could resist a good challenge.
Option 3B:http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f208/lonleyprincess/DSC01616.jpg
A contest entry
- Mosaic by Ms. Black Eyeliner.
700 points, ended September 18, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
We attract hearts by the qualities we display: we retain them by the qualities we possess. --Suard
Comments
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thanks for the comment. i had a lovely picture to work with! thanks for the contest!
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thanks and your welcome
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gracias for the poem and entering my contest
"Need to be wanted
need to be chased
need to be taken
need to be shaken." i love this i love the repetition of "need" and you might me right *innocent face* lol
"I see
pensiveness
fear?
Anger maybe.
Anger bottled up?
Frustrations behind the looks
Too much injury held in
too much sorrow?" i love this too and maybe you could be right lol
"Fully clothed
yet stark naked" nice juxtapostion
"Erotically unsure
yet a picture of sublime eroticism
capable of stirring even
those dead to passion." never heard that one before lol thanks
great job
good luck in the contest
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thanks for the comment. i had a lovely picture to work with! thanks for the contest!
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