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Without You

I'm lost without you
Day by day, night by night
You've never known
What I couldn't tell you

How could I tell you
Exactly what I feel
You'd never understand
You'd disappear

I can't lose you
Your Friendship is everything to me
Even if it means
Loving you in anguish

The truth:
I Love You
I love you wholeheartedly
Desperate, unrequited, true, gentle love

I can't breathe when I think of you
I can't think when you're near
When you find me, my heart doesn't seem to care if it beats or not
For it's no longer mine

It disappeared so gradually
piece by piece
It was gone
before I'd even noticed.

I love you so deeply
And that is why I cannot tell you
The fear of losing you completely
Is too much to bear.

All of this is too much to bear.

    I love you.

Is your love too much to ask for? 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    I can see your heart wrapped in the words of your wonderful poetry...I love it..well done..and thank you so much for sharing..and entring in my contest...


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    lovely Write

    I am blessed to read this love ballad, it was so moving
    Thank you for writing pure love from your heart

    Rend The Veil