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Empty

Ripping down the crumbling layers of memories,
scraping off every tiny inch of my broken past,
tears fall gently down,searching for this faded star,
screaming into this night sky,not knowing where you are,
you left in the morning through silent roads of cars,




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  • forever changed
    September 10, 2008
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    Awwhh thanks kyndale,much appreceited : ) It started off with re decorating my room weirdly...lol,old memories of past gone by,changes and fresh starts,I'm not really sure how I am going to finish it,need more inspiration hehee,thank you anyways though xoxox


  • BitterDreamer
    September 9, 2008
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    good start. a LOT of emotion in this piece so far.
    i can't wait to read the finished product!