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Immune To It

When I see him walking throught the corridor, I don't see fireworks.
The ground doesn't disappear and I don't clam up.
I just find myself smiling for no apparent reason.
Is this love?
You tell me.

comments and critisism very very welcome!

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    Sounds to me like genuine comfort with yourself and with this person. Nicely penned!