I am dark and cold but so many seem to enjoy my company
I am a new fad
The thing you see so often
The punk rockers and emo kids have me spiriling in there hair and all down there body
But by the end of the day everyone wants me
I no longer seem out of place
I have so many friends and so many enemies
At least I know I am known.....
Author notes
written: 9-5-08
it was written for a contest about a color. message me if you guessed the color. hehe.
A contest entry
- Poetry Charades: Colors by Bitter Irony.
450 points, ended September 6, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please help me!
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I am guessing also that the color is black..your emotions are very thick in this..which is excellent..you can feel confusion and pain..which is what teenage angst is all about..you have done so well with your imagery..and relating it to the color..great write hun..thanx so much for sharing..blessings...
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Nice riddle, but watch for grammar mistakes: "there" in the first line of the second stanza should be "their."
I'm guessing your color is black.
Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!
~Bitter Irony
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darkness is what i see in this, i like it a nice riddle regarding the colour, I can't decide if it is black seeing as the night sky is not entirely black
I love the imagery in this, very nice work, good luck
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mmmm I like this..... I'm guessing Black!? lol
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Interesting enigma.
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