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If Ever You Think of Me

If ever you think of me,
Just close your eyes,
And in your life I will be.
The past good bye will fade away-
We'll once again be together and happy.

No longer will we be apart,
As we are for right now-
But we will be one mind and heart
Together for forever once again,
As we were at the very start.

Life will once again be sweet,
And just as we want it to be.
Life and love will be complete,
Not having any doubts or fears,
Like an easy stroll down the street.

If ever you think of me,
The past hurts will be no more.
We will be together and free,
To live our lives as we do in dreams,
And in those dreams is where I'll be.

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 19, 2008

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    This poem is very strong and I like it
    Well formed and would only suggest you challenge yourself with more complicated subject and rhyme

    well done poet